Missy and Sarah
By
Annika Sher
(age 7)
By
Annika Sher
(age 7)
Once upon a time there were two friends a 8-year old girl. And a puppy named Sarah. The girl,s name was Missy.
Sarah was good at tricks. One day when Missy,s mom was reading the news-paper. She found that next week there will be a dog-show! To get in the show you need only 1$! She told Missy. And asked if they wanted to be on the show.
Missy “said no!” We,re not good enough! Besides Sarah is just a puppy.
“just asking. But she kept on reading about the dog-show. She found out that there was a dog -show for puppy's she told Missy.
Missy “said well can I go in the puppy-dog-show”.
Mom “ said “ sure” if you want.
next week Missy and Sarah went to the puppy-dog-show. There were tons of owners and puppy,s all over the place! Then Missy “said wens the show going to start.”
her mom “said in a few minutes.”
wen the show started the announcer “said first up is Amy and Sunny.” Amy and Sunny stepped on the stage.
There was an obstacle-course set up for the puppy,s. There were things to jump over. Things to jump through. And things to crawl under. First there was a hoop set up. Sunny jumped up... but didn't make it. There was something to jump over she didn't make it. The rest of them were bad.
Then it was there turn. Sarah got them all right! They won!
Missy and Sarah went to all the puppy-dog-shows and won all of them! Wow! Since then Missy and Sarah were the puppy-dog-show champions!
Wen Missy grew up she was a puppy-dog-show
judge. (It was fun.)
(original and unedited)
11 comments:
Great story, Annika!
I like dog shows.
Good job!
Sunny
Love the story, Annika (and Vonnie, she LOVES the pictures you picked.)
I love all the details. Keep writing, my dear!
Great story! You are such a talented young lady!!!
What a great story Annika. Sarah and Missy would have missed out if they haven't given the show a try. Hope you'll keep writing stories.
Very fun story, Annika! I'm glad Missy and Sarah won and you even told us what happened in the future! Yay!
What a wonderful story and beautifully told! Do you have a puppy? I think you are getting hooked on this "writing" thing like so many of us only at a much earlier age!
Wonderful and fun story, Annika! Thank you for sharing it! I loved it!
Thank you for sharing this story with us Annika. You did such a great job describing it that I could picture them winning in my mind.
See what happens when you just try? Your story can come true for you, Annika! Look! You're already a published author. Keep up the good work and you will go far, juyst like Missy and Sarah. Good job, Annika!
Super story! Lots of tension (would Missy and Sarah go in the show... would they win?), good dialogue and a fantastic lesson. Can't wait to read more from you, Annika. :)
Congratulations Annika!
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