The Rescue




The Rescue
by Tiago Lima Jacobsohn
(age 10)

There was this awesome kid and his parents. His parents were the
coolest people of all. There was this evil person who captured
Tiago’s parents. Then Tiago had to get Tiago’s parents back. Tiago
had two light sabers but they were unstable. They could not go and
save them, Tiago had to face alone an army of spiders. But there
were different types of spiders, they were black widows, tarantulas
and sun spiders and they were lead by a scorpion, after defied the
spider master.

The army was hard to fight because, before destroyed. Tiago had ten
lives because he was inside this game. It was nearly impossible to
destroy the sun spider, they circled around the spiders (you have
machine guns, light sabers and swords and you can use the skin of the
spider). And Tiago can defeat the scorpion cutting his tail and claws
and then, throw a grenade. But the scorpion did not die, they fall
asleep (when a person dies, you can come back but they don’t allow you to fight anymore).

But when Tiago blows the ceiling of the facility, place they were,
Tiago sees his parents and got them in the helicopter and fly away.

The end.

(with dictation software, unedited)

11 comments:

Joanne Sher said...

You obviously know a lot about spiders, Tiago. Lots of good action. Very good story!

Anonymous said...

Thank you, Tiago. You are a good story teller.
Good job! Keep writing!
Sunny

BethL said...

You have quite an imagination, Tiago. Your story was filled with action and adventure. I especially liked your creativity with all the characters in your story, the spiders, tarantulas, and, of course, the scorpion! Keep writing!

Ana said...

We are very proud of you and your awesome stories!
We love you!

Tristi Pinkston said...

What a great story! Thanks for telling it to us.

Twinsmom said...

You have a wonderful imagination! Goood job! -- Lori Duffy Foster

Samantha Sotto said...

Awesome story, Tiago! :)

p said...

Great Story Tiago! can't wait for the sequel! Peter

Anonymous said...

Parabens Tiago! Estaremos esperando o seu primeiro livro! Queremos o
autografo do autor, hem! :-)

Abracos,

-Gustavo, Vanessa, Victoria e Guilherme

Unknown said...

Lots of good action Tiago. You have a good imagination. Good job.

Angela Reis said...

Great Tiago! A lot of imagination and I was so happy that you end up to rescue your parents. congratulations! Keep writing. Kisses from your Brazilian friend.

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