Perfectly Enticing


Perfectly Enticing
by
Alyssa Thompson
(age 9)

Icing is perfectly enticing.
It is perfect to me.
I love it so.
I don’t want to let it go.
It is perfect on anything.
Like pretzel sticks and candy,
cupcakes and cakes,
Anything you please!

(original and unedited)

5 comments:

  1. Joanne SherJune 25, 2011 at 10:00 AM

    So sweet (in more than one way!) - and a wonderful poem!

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  2. AnonymousJune 25, 2011 at 6:07 PM

    Alyssa, you're making me hungry!
    Good job! Keep writing!

    Sunny

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  3. LindaJune 26, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    Yummy poem! I enjoyed it. Keep writing. I love to write poems.

    Linda

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  4. Yvonne BlakeJune 26, 2011 at 4:08 PM

    Yum!

    Verna

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  5. SparrowAugust 18, 2011 at 10:26 PM

    "Icing is perfectly enticing." I love the way that sentence rolls off the tongue and hisses through the teeth. Great poem!

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