Dolphins



Dolfens
by David Wilber
(age 6)
(written after observing a mother and baby
feeding near his Florida home)



I saw dolfens splashing.
They wr crashing.
They wr rile dashing.
Splash-splash-splash.
I saw dolfens splashing.

(original and unedited)

6 comments:

  1. Joanne SherJune 18, 2011 at 10:52 AM

    WOW - absolutely an author in training. Wonderful!

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  2. Barbara Lynn CullerJune 18, 2011 at 11:54 AM

    I love your story! How lucky to be able to watch dolphins play!

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  3. HoomiJune 18, 2011 at 12:35 PM

    I saw a lot of dolphins on a recent trip to Mexico. This poetic description fits them perfectly. :)

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  4. Yvonne BlakeJune 18, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    " So smooth and slippery, they glide through the water! "
    (from Judith Pugh)

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  5. .June 18, 2011 at 4:07 PM

    Good job! A nice job on your poem!

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  6. LauryJune 18, 2011 at 5:56 PM

    I wish I could see them but I'm glad you shared this poem with me so I could see them this way!

    Thank you, David! Very nice writing!

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