My Camping Trip



My Camping Trip
By
Kaelyn Abbott
(age 9)


We left at 1:00. We had burgers for supper. We went swimming and i met a new friend named Joey and he is ten years old.

I felt so excited. We went swimming for like 9 hours. Then we went tubing and everything was good. I was having so much fun and we jumped off at the dock and swam all night.

The next day me and my cousin went tubing. We went under a big big wave and i had to go to the hospital. We wached fiarwerks. We left the next day.

The End

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6 comments:

  1. Joanne SherJuly 8, 2011 at 9:11 AM

    What an exciting trip you had! Thanks for sharing it with us.

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  2. Barbara Lynn CullerJuly 9, 2011 at 8:49 AM

    Wow! You sure had a lot of fun in two days! Thanks for sharing your story.

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  3. Verna Cole MitchellJuly 9, 2011 at 10:22 AM

    I liked your story. It sounds like a fun beach trip, except for getting hurt.

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  4. Rita GarciaJuly 9, 2011 at 1:48 PM

    I loved reading your exciting story! I hope you write more stories real soon!

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  5. AnonymousJuly 9, 2011 at 5:05 PM

    What a great story, Kaelyn!
    It sounded like so much fun.
    Good job. Keep writing.

    Sunny

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  6. SparrowAugust 18, 2011 at 10:54 PM

    I love tubing! I haven't gotten to go for a long time, though. Too bad you ended up in the hospital, but otherwise sounded like a fun day!

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