My Sweetheart


My Sweetheart
by
Kaelyn Abbott
(10 yrs old)



I want to have a raindeer for my Birthday. It would be so much fun. I would take it for a ride in the sky every night. I would go to the bangor mall and by some Christmas prasents.

My raindeer name is Sweetheart and i named her that Because She loves chocolate cookies. And She flyes by magic dust. I order it from the north pole.

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9 comments:

  1. Joanne SherDecember 3, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    Kaelyn, what a lovely story! I think I would like a reindeer too. Thanks for sharing your story with us!

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  2. AnonymousDecember 3, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    i love it its so great i like the part when you go to the Bangor mall and buy christmas presents for people - Elias

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  3. .December 3, 2011 at 8:05 PM

    I think I would like to fly high too. What a great story idea. I love the name of the reindeer as well. Great job!

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  4. Yvonne BlakeDecember 3, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    Kaelyn, I like this story. Having a pet reindeer would be fun.

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  5. AnonymousDecember 3, 2011 at 8:20 PM

    Good story, Kaelyn!
    Now I want a reindeer too.
    Keep writing!

    Sunny

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  6. Lynn RobinsonDecember 3, 2011 at 8:39 PM

    I liked your story Kaelyn. I think it would be fun to have a reindeer and to be able to fly in the sky with it.

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  7. Catrina BradleyDecember 3, 2011 at 8:47 PM

    I never thought about it, but I agree - a reindeer would be COOL pet! I love your story!

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  8. Julie BrassbridgeDecember 4, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    I loved your story Kaelyn. Just think of the money we could save on gas it we all had reindeer. I think it would be exciting to see everything while riding on one. Thank you for sharing your story.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 2, 2012 at 8:11 AM

    Great story, Kaelyn

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