Underwater Adventures
by
Sophie Morrison
(age 9)
chapter 2
Shark!
The shark stared hungrily at Finn and Eddy. Then it opened its mouth, showing teeth as big and sharp as knives. Eddy screamed and so did Finn. They swam as fast as they could toward the entrance of the cave, with Splinter slithering along beside them.
But Light-bulb stayed behind. He was following a piece of seaweed right into the sharks' mouth! Finn froze. If he tried to save his pet, he would die. If he swam away, his pet would die. Finally, he zoomed toward Light-bulb, grabbed him, and zoomed of again. His pet was safe!
Chapter 3
Adventure in the dark
“Do you think we should go back in there?” panted Eddy. “Not right now,” said Finn.”We should wait 'till the shark is gone, then go back in.”
“Good idea.”
When the boys were certain that the shark had left, they went back in the cave. They swam and swam until they got tired, then stopped to rest. Eddy had packed two fish sandwiches, so he took them out and gave one to Finn.
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