Green Cookies
by
Elias Cooper
(age 11)
"Hi Sam," said John.
"Hellos," said Sam.
"Why so sullen, Sam?" asked John. "You look...as mad as a tiger
and sick as a person who just bard," he said.
Sam yelled, "My sister made Brussel Sprout cookies!"
"And Mom thought they were healthy and I ate them."
John put away his lunch. He felt sick.
He and Sam never had cookies that were dyed green again.
"Hi Sam," said John.
"Hellos," said Sam.
"Why so sullen, Sam?" asked John. "You look...as mad as a tiger
and sick as a person who just bard," he said.
Sam yelled, "My sister made Brussel Sprout cookies!"
"And Mom thought they were healthy and I ate them."
John put away his lunch. He felt sick.
He and Sam never had cookies that were dyed green again.
( Lesson #9 Dialogue, Polliwog Pages Writing Lessons)
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This was so creative and fun! I love the idea!
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