Perfectly Enticing
by
Alyssa Thompson
(age 9)
Icing is perfectly enticing.
It is perfect to me.
I love it so.
I don’t want to let it go.
It is perfect on anything.
Like pretzel sticks and candy,
cupcakes and cakes,
Anything you please!
by
Alyssa Thompson
(age 9)
Icing is perfectly enticing.
It is perfect to me.
I love it so.
I don’t want to let it go.
It is perfect on anything.
Like pretzel sticks and candy,
cupcakes and cakes,
Anything you please!
(original and unedited)
5 comments:
So sweet (in more than one way!) - and a wonderful poem!
Alyssa, you're making me hungry!
Good job! Keep writing!
Sunny
Yummy poem! I enjoyed it. Keep writing. I love to write poems.
Linda
Yum!
Verna
"Icing is perfectly enticing." I love the way that sentence rolls off the tongue and hisses through the teeth. Great poem!
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