My Camping Trip
By
Kaelyn Abbott
(age 9)
We left at 1:00. We had burgers for supper. We went swimming and i met a new friend named Joey and he is ten years old.
I felt so excited. We went swimming for like 9 hours. Then we went tubing and everything was good. I was having so much fun and we jumped off at the dock and swam all night.
The next day me and my cousin went tubing. We went under a big big wave and i had to go to the hospital. We wached fiarwerks. We left the next day.
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6 comments:
What an exciting trip you had! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Wow! You sure had a lot of fun in two days! Thanks for sharing your story.
I liked your story. It sounds like a fun beach trip, except for getting hurt.
I loved reading your exciting story! I hope you write more stories real soon!
What a great story, Kaelyn!
It sounded like so much fun.
Good job. Keep writing.
Sunny
I love tubing! I haven't gotten to go for a long time, though. Too bad you ended up in the hospital, but otherwise sounded like a fun day!
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