My Sweetheart
by
Kaelyn Abbott
(10 yrs old)
I want to have a raindeer for my Birthday. It would be so much fun. I would take it for a ride in the sky every night. I would go to the bangor mall and by some Christmas prasents.
My raindeer name is Sweetheart and i named her that Because She loves chocolate cookies. And She flyes by magic dust. I order it from the north pole.
the end
(original and unedited)
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9 comments:
Kaelyn, what a lovely story! I think I would like a reindeer too. Thanks for sharing your story with us!
i love it its so great i like the part when you go to the Bangor mall and buy christmas presents for people - Elias
I think I would like to fly high too. What a great story idea. I love the name of the reindeer as well. Great job!
Kaelyn, I like this story. Having a pet reindeer would be fun.
Good story, Kaelyn!
Now I want a reindeer too.
Keep writing!
Sunny
I liked your story Kaelyn. I think it would be fun to have a reindeer and to be able to fly in the sky with it.
I never thought about it, but I agree - a reindeer would be COOL pet! I love your story!
I loved your story Kaelyn. Just think of the money we could save on gas it we all had reindeer. I think it would be exciting to see everything while riding on one. Thank you for sharing your story.
Great story, Kaelyn
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