"Some Foods You Can't Trust"




Some Food You Can't Trust
by
Elias Cooper 
(age 12)

Jasper zoomed to the table.There was shrimp and noodles sloshed with a weird green sauce he'd never seen before--dark green. He thought it looked good. He took a big bite. He stopped, grimaced, and swallowed. Jasper looked at the food oddly. He slumped in his chair. He asked to be excused from the dinner table. Then he slipped into the kitchen to get a turkey sandwich. 


(assignment for Lesson 15 - "Showing not Telling")


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