It Would Be Fine

It Would Be Fine

by

Mercedez Whitmore

(age 9)

Oh, it would be fine to go under the sea

and watch all the fish swim free,

but we'll maybe find a shark

and we might get so scared we'll bark!

Maybe we'll discover a sunken ship

and that would be such a great trip.

We'll pretend we're finding the titanic,

but we'll probably still panic

because our submarine needs a mechanic!

But I prefer staying home

so I won't be alone.

I have friends, I have family

and I can see the stars up above

I can read I can play

as long as I have friends everyday.

Those places might be fun to see

but if you stay home

you can still visit these places

while you read.

(original and unedited)

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Signed,
Wiggles the Polliwog